Star
Wars III: Fall of the Republic
The following
is purely fan fiction from 1983. Many believed it to be a real
treatment of Episode III, written by George Lucas, and it was
circulated among fans. Of course, Lucas had nothing to do with
it, but today it is still interesting as a piece of early prequel
speculation.
Star Wars III:
Fall of the Republic
Story treatment
by John L. Flynn
Adapted from Part I:
"The Adventures of Obi-Wan Kenobi"
The Journal of the Whills
By George Lucas
FADE IN:
MAIN AND
CREDIT TITLES SUPERIMPOSED ON THE BLACK OF OUTER SPACE -- pinpointed
with piercing stars, several moons, and a bright-colored nebulae.
As TITLES end -- The following is related in the story, roll-up
format:
Long
ago, in a galaxy far, far away, the Old Republic was crumbling
away, rotting from the corruption and treachery within. Power-hungry
technocrats and wealthy bureaucrats maneuvered and bribed their
way into office, while one am- bitious senator plotted to destroy
the Jedi and rule the galaxy.
Hoping to restore
virtue and the remembered glory of the Republic, the High Council
of Senators dispatched the Jedi Knights - protectorate of justice
in the galaxy - on a quest to retrieve the lost Kaiburr Crystal.
They believed that the small diamond-like object (which intensified
the power of the Force) would unite the disaffected among the
people and would destroy the corruption around them.
However, within
their Council, the evil Senator Palpatine had other traitorous
designs. Foreseeing that the Crystal would secure his position
as Emperor, Palpatine deceived one of the Jedi Knights and sent
him to acquire the Crystal. . .
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TO:
SCENE 1:
Sigma Vulcanus -- a new, evolving world, that is con- stantly
being shook by violent earthquakes and volcanic eruptions, and
which is devoid of sentient life-forms. On the molten, volcanic
world of Sigma Vulcanus, Anakin Skywalker, a handsome, swarthy
man with a dignified stature, makes an important discovery. Using
his lightsabre (as the equivalent of a divining rod), he uncovers
the legendary Kaiburr Crystal. It pulsates with energy and fills
Skywalker with a false sense of power and importance. But before
he can savor his triumph, and return the Crystal to Palpatine,
he is confronted by his old friend, and fellow Jedi Knight, Obi-Wan
Kenobi and requested to explain his actions. Anakin refuses, and
instantly, the two knights draw their lethal weapons and become
locked in mortal combat.
Anakin Skywalker,
as if controlled by another force, strikes swiftly in rage, but
Obi-Wan Kenobi, the more experienced Jedi, easily deflects the
furious blows of his young opponent. "Let go of the Crystal, my
friend! Its power will consume you and turn you against the Jedi
Knights," Kenobi explains. But the words are un-heeded by the
young Jedi, and the conflict continues.
Skywalker
attacks Obi-Wan again, forcing him to discard his defensive posture.
Kenobi parries the thrust and sends Ana- kin's lightsabre flying
out of his hand. At precisely the same moment, a cataclysmic earthquake
rocks the planet. The effect is devastating: fissures, in the
earth crack open and spout walls of flame; thunder and lightning
strike violently from the sky; and several volcanos burst and
bubble.
The young
Jedi struggles to regain his lightsabre, but loses his footing
and plunges, still in possession of the Crys- tal, into a pit
of molten lava.
Kenobi hurries
to the edge of the volcano and looks down; but he is too late
to save his former friend: Skywalker is completely engulfed in
lava! With tears in his eyes and anguish in his heart, Obi-Wan
picks up Anakin's lightsabre and bids a sad farewell to the body
of his friend.
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SCENE 2:
Jhantor -- is "the bright center of the universe." Highly populated
and technology-oriented, it is an old world of many contrasts:
the huge, domed capital, with its elaborate space ports and transportation
systems, stands adjacent to an ancient castle and temple. In another
part of the galaxy, on the capital world of Jhantor, Palpatine
enters his senate chambers - followed closely by a brash, young
courtier named Prince Valarium - and assumes his place at the
head of a conference table. Valarium stands next to him and whispers
in his ear as Palpatine's wizened eyes travel around the table
from man to man.
Through
a terse discussion with his cabinet members and personal guard,
Palpatine reveals that he has bribed or black- mailed most of
the High Council members into voting for him as President, but
he is concerned with three senators who cannot be swayed - Tara
Courtney, Mon Mothma, and Bail Organa. He further explains that,
once they have been eliminated, he intends to have his troops
take over the Spice and Mineral Mines and blockade the commercial
shipping lanes.
Several
of his personal guard nod their approval; how- ever, two young
officers stand and voice their disagreement. Lieutenant Motti
(bright, young and smartly-dressed) and Com- mander Tarkin (thin,
hatchet-faced with dark eyes) report that Palpatine's military
force (which he has genetically engineered on the prison planet)
are en route to the Spice Mines and Star- ports AND that they
are ready to take command of the Starfleet; but they fear the
swift retribution of the Jedi Knights!
"I think
I know the best way to deal with that rabble," Palpatine announces,
standing and walking over to his cabinet. "It's time that I demonstrate
my absolute power--"
Taking a
large, crystal globe form his cabinet, Palpatine strokes it with
his long, well-manicured fingers, then traces the longitude and
latitude lines. The object begins to glow, and (with ILM's help)
conjures a series of images from the planet Sigma Vulcanus. These
images combine and crystallize on the SINGLE image of the dead
Anakin Skywalker.
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SCENE 3:
Sigma Vulcanus Four shadowy figures - adorned only in dark, hooded
robes (which conceal their identity) - approach the charred, motionless
body of Anakin Skywalker and lift him from his fiery grave. Skywalker's
flesh is torn and scabbed, his hair is missing and clumped in
disgusting patches. Deep scars trace his face, and his body and
limbs are without life.
They place
him on the ground with great reverence and begin to administer
to his injuries in an attempt to bring him back to life. One robed
figure motions to the other: "Bring me the herbs and remedies."
He actually says nothing but is instantly understood by the others.
A third figure sprinkles the body with a powder, while a fourth
looks toward the stars and begins to chant in a deep, rumbling
voice.
In a matter
of moments, the lifeless body of Anakin Skywalker stirs, as we
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SCENE 4:
Dagobah (introduced in Episode Five: Empire Strikes Bk) Far across
the galaxy, on the bog world of Dagobah, Obi-Wan Kenobi walks
through the dense fog and pauses, unhappy and dejected because
he has been forced by circumstances to kill his friend. He turns
to Yoda, his eight hundred year-old teacher and says: "I have
failed, Master Yoda."
Yoda gives
him a contemptuous stare, then closes his eyes: "No good is it
to teach you when you have not yet learned patience! Humility!"
Obi-Wan
shakes his head and offers an excuse as his reply: "But Anakin
was my friend. The Force was with him very strongly, and I thought
that I could be as good a teacher as you were with me." He pauses
and breathes a deep sigh: "I fear my mistake may have terrible
consequences for the galaxy!"
The Jedi
Master points a crooked finger at him: "Most important lesson
have you learned! Now a great burden you carry."
Kenobi squeezes
his tear-filled eyes shut and drops his head in defeat. But Yoda
is immediately at his side to offer comfort and to reveal that
Anakin is not dead. He further explains the incidents which have
just taken place and foresees a deadly conflict.
The Jedi
Knight is pale and silent for a long moment. Then, slowly, he,
too, recognizes the entire awesome threat that Palpatine has brought
to the Old Republic. He thinks of the lives of his friends (Lady
Arcadia Skywalker and Bail Organa) and realizes that he must leave
immediately for Jhantor.
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SCENE 5:
Bridge Interior -- a small, saucer-shaped freighter, with cramped
quarters and a cockpit-like bridge. On the starship bridge, Captain
Antilles - a rugged, mustached thirty-year old - makes final calculations
for his approach to Jhantor when two tractor beams lock-on and
bring his vessel to a halt. His short-range scanners reveal two
sentry fighters, swooping into a holding pattern on his port and
starboard sides. The sentry pilots order him to heave-to and prepare
to be boarded.
"No," he
snarls in reply - but quickly reconsiders, when his protocol droid
(C3PO) and his ten-year-old, Correllian cabin boy remind him that
he is out-gunned. Antilles brings his ship about, and, in moments,
despite his objections, a handful of Palpatine's troops board
the freighter and confiscate his cargo.
Captain
Antilles curses the officer in charge, and explains the incident
is far from over, as we
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SCENE 6:
Jhantor
When the
tragic news of Tara Courtney's assassination reaches her embassy
chambers, Lady Arcadia Skywalker is shocked and hastily gathers
her servants and droids to leave for her homeworld. She is a beautiful
matron, who is in the last stages of pregnancy, and she is fearful
for her unborn child (or children).
For the
past several weeks, she has watched the order of Jhantor deteriorate
into anarchy under the rule of Palpatine, and she has made plans
to escape, by smuggling her household aboard a spice freighter.
But, in
the docking bay, Lady Arcadia and her party are suddenly surrounded
by a heavily-armed detachment of troops, activating their weapons
and raising them to firing position. She turns to the officer
in charge and demands to know what's going on; but he doesn't
know - he is simply following orders. She resists his authority,
claiming diplomatic immunity, but quickly reconsiders when the
voice of evil echoes through the bay:
"You mustn't
be so hasty, Lady Skywalker!" PRESIDENT Palpatine emerges from
the shadows, accompanied by Prince Valarium, and explains that
Arcadia, her servants, her droids, and her pilot are being placed
under his protective custody.
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SCENE 7:
Sigma Vulcanus -- The Monastic Order of the Sith -- a spartan-like
retreat, high atop a mountain ridge Through a montage of scenes,
wherein Anakin Skywalker remains in a coma, the silent, robed
figures minister to his in- juries. Their task is an awesome one:
First, in a most sophis- ticated furnace, they forge battle armour
and a metal breath-screen (skull-like in appearance) that will
cover his demolished visage. Next, they amputate his arms and
limbs that no longer function, repair vital organs, and encase
the torso - forever - in the dreaded armour and artificial respirator.
Finally, they restore the severed limbs with intricate computer
circuitry and revive him from his comatose state. Anakin Skywalker
becomes Darth Vader, more machine than man!
Following
his repairs, the monk-like figures (still hidden under their hooded
robes) begin to instruct Vader in a dark, evil parody of Luke's
apprenticeship under Yoda. Darth Vader is taught many sorceror's
skills; he is lectured on the sinister machinations of the Force
and is shown how to construct an even more lethal sabre using
fragments of the shattered Kaiburr Crystal. But with each new
challenge, and skill accomplished, Vader is doubtful of purpose.
He knows he is being trained as a power weapon - and yet, he cannot
conceive why.
Angered
by this confusion, and the fear that his humanity (and manhood)
has been stripped away, Darth Vader strikes out in rage at one
of his hooded teachers only to discover an empty robe. He is momentarily
terror-stricken and then mystified as, one by one, the hooded
figures vanish - in a strangely, compelling way - to reveal a
3-D holographic image of Palpatine.
"Yes, yes,"
Palpatine taunts him, "Only now do you conceive that is was my
force of will that saved you - that kept you alive - and that
gave you life again!"
Darth Vader
extends a courtly bow to Palpatine and thanks him for his life.
But Palpatine is not interested in gratitude. He is in need of
a powerful weapon and an obedient servant, and he reminds the
former Jedi that he has the power to crush him should he desire.
He then forces Vader to his knees and commands: "Now come to me,
my servant. I have an important task that will complete your training!"
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SCENE 8:
Jhantor -- Docking-bay and City Exteriors
Obi-Wan
Kenobi's approach and arrival on Jhantor is undetected by the
planetary defenses. Marshalling his Jedi strength and cunning,
he is able to slip past the sentries in the docking bay, edge
by the troops patrolling the perimeter and reach the home of Lady
Skywalker. But when he reaches the embassy, the huge chambers
are silent and empty - and there are no apparent clues as to the
Lady's whereabouts.
Then, out
of the darkness, Captain Antilles appears and confirms what Kenobi
already suspects: The Lady and her party have been detained as
"guests" of Palpatine in the prison cell block. After introducing
himself (as Captain of a Correllian freighter), Antilles explains
that he came to her embassy, seeking the help of the Merchanter's
Guild (because of the piracy of his goods), and discovered an
R2 unit (Artoo Detoo), that had slipped away during her capture,
cowering in the shadows. He further reveals that the R2 unit has
monitored her termination notice!
Realizing
that he has little time, Obi-Wan enlists the pilot's aid; and
the two men, accompanied by the stubby, mechanical droid, hurry
toward the cell-block.
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SCENE 9:
Jhantor -- Palpatine's Senate Chambers
Palpatine
orders his guards to bring the captured slaver to his senate chambers.
While pacing back and forth, he examines the individual who stands
before him in chains and shrewdly considers his fate: Boba Fett,
the lone survivor of a group of commandos the Jedi defeated on
Mandalore during the Clone Wars, is charged with interstellar
slavery and the cold-blooded murder of the Jedi Kane Starkiller
(Refer to Star Wars: Episode II). Fett's battle-scarred face sneers
at the charges, defending his actions as "righteous vengeance."
The evil
President stares malevolently at Boba Fett for several moments,
then offers him his freedom (and his confiscated slavership) in
exchange for the extermination of the Jedi Knights. He also promises
him a rich bounty for each Jedi scalp that he brings back; he
wants proof of their deaths - and no disintegrations. Fett grins
and replies that he may have difficulty in locating them since
they are scattered throughout the galaxy. But Palpatine reassures
him that the task should be an easy one with the President's secret
weapon.
Boba Fett
dubiously agrees, as his chains are unlocked and he is escorted
from the chambers.
As the slaver
exits, Prince Valarium - accompanied by a few personal guards
- announces the arrival of Darth Vader. Palpatine, in a quiet
whisper, advises Valarium to - personally - supervise Lady Arcadia's
execution, then requests that Vader be shown in.
As the guards
stand aside, Darth Vader, tall and threatening in flowing black
robes and armour, enters the chamber and kneels before his master.
Palpatine smiles, looking at his nightmare creation in black,
and commands him to hunt down and destroy the Jedi Knights. Vader
is hesitant and requests permission to visit his wife. But Palpatine
refuses, telling his servant a vicious lie that she has been murdered
by his comrades, and produces his crystal globe as evidence.
Seemingly
unmoved, Vader turns to look at a series of images Palpatine conjures
(from the globe). The images re-create - in holographic form -
the treacherous betrayal and murder of Lady Arcadia by two of
Vader's fellow knights. (Note: since the images are too brutal
for our saga, tight point-of-view camera angles should convey
the details.) When the last image vanishes, the Dark Lord, fooled
by the false images, stands, ignite his lightsabre and strikes
the crystal globe with monumental anger. And this rage completes
Vader's journey to the dark side.
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SCENE 10:
Jhantor -- Cell-block
Meanwhile,
deep in the cell-block dungeons, Obi-Wan Kenobi and Captain Antilles
overpower a pair of detention guards and open Lady Arcadia's cell.
Overjoyed to find her still alive, Obi-Wan embraces Arcadia warmly,
then senses the pains of her motherly contractions. Antilles interrupts
their embrace and reminds them to save their hellos until they're
safely out of the cell-block. But, as they leave the cell, Prince
Valarium and his personal guards appear and draw their weapons.
Antilles exchanges fire with the guards, and Obi-Wan and Arcadia
hurry off into the dungeon maze, followed closely by the Correllian
pilot.
Retreating
down a linking corridor, past the cell-block armory, the two heroes
- with their pregnant fugitive - decide to stand firm and fight.
Captain Antilles charges his weapon and blasts away at the detention
guards, while the Jedi Knight concentrates all his thoughts and
feeling on detonating the arsenal and sealing the dungeon exit.
But, in the midst of his efforts, Kenobi's heightened senses feel
his former friend's RAGE. The rage, in turn, betrays Vader's thoughts
and President Palpatine's sinister mission (to Obi-Wan).
"Whatever
you're doing - do it faster!" Antilles shouts, snapping the Jedi
out of his daze. Kenobi immediately refocuses his energy and,
in a matter of moments, the armory explodes, iso- lating the guards
from them. However, the noise and excitement are too much for
the Lady Skywalker as she doubles over in pain.
The Correllian
pilot fears she's been hit by flying shrapnel - but Kenobi says
she's having a baby and advises Antilles take her to the safety
of his freighter. He further explains that he must leave - in
spite of his desire to help Arcadia - to warn his fellow knights
of Vader's treachery.
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SCENE 11:
Jhantor -- Palpatine's Chambers
Reporting
to the President's chambers, Valarium reluc- tantly tells of Lady
Skywalker's escape. Palpatine is angered and quickly orders -
over his private comlink - a division of troops to search the
city. He then orders the arrest of Mon Mothma and Bail Organa
to prevent any further interferences in his plans.
Turning
to Valarium, Palpatine's face darkens to an insane fury. Blinding
energy bolts shoot from his finger tips, and the young Prince
is struck down. "Don't fail me again!" Palpatine warns, as Prince
Valarium crawls, like a wounded animal, to his side and gasps,
"Never . . ."
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SCENE 12:
Jhantor -- Docking bay, interior of saucer-shaped Correlian freighter
In the dank,
dark hangar-bay, Obi-Wan Kenobi departs in his starship, and Captain
Antilles turns his attention to one of his most difficult tasks.
With the nervous assistance of C3PO, he first comforts Lady Skywalker,
then helps deliver her children. The moment is a joyous, mystic
one as Luke and Leia take their 1st breath and begin crying. But
that special sound of babies crying brings a detachment of troops
down upon them!
* * Special
Note: The troops should be costumed dif- ferently from the stormtroopers
because they are part of Bail Organa's personal guard, - but the
scene should cause a false moment of suspense for Antilles, and
the audience.
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SCENE 13:
Jhantor -- Palpatine's Chambers
Still enraged
from Valarium's carelessness, Palpatine plots a unique political
move that will destroy Lady Arcadia's influence with the Merchanter's
Guild AND further cement his power with commerce and industry.
He first frees a handful of pirates and bribes them to raid the
Spice Mines and Mineral Springs; he then orders his personal troops
to eliminate the pirates and guard - as well as regulate - the
shipping lanes.
But. in
the midst of his political maneuvering, Palpatine is struck down
- paralyzed - for a few, fleeting moments. When he regains his
composure, he is deeply disturbed by a nightmare premonitions,
a tremor in the Force which threatens his well being. He senses
Lady Arcadia's true strength - the birth of a son that would one
day challenge his power. (But he fails - in his twisted wickedness
- to sense the second child!)
Sending
his special group of assassins into Jhantor, Palpatine orders
them to kill every new-born son - both in the capital city and
the nearby outlands - because, for the first time in his life,
he is afraid. (The character should be played much like Herod's
in the New Testament.)
This brutal
action (of Palpatine's) spawns screams of anguish and unrestricted
weeping as the soldiers - unquestion- ingly - carry out their
violent task. (Note: The horror of the events will be merely suggested
- and not shown - to our cameras.)
IMMEDIATE
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SCENES 14
TO 18: Numerous Worlds -- Each distinct in its own way Across
the galaxy, in a terror-filled montage of scenes, wherein we glimpse
numerous worlds and races, the betrayal and execution of the Jedi
Knights is perpetrated. Darth Vader and a handful of Palpatine's
assassins barge into an exotic saloon and eliminate an alien-looking
Jedi amidst screams and mass hysteria from the patrons.
While this
is happening, Boba Fett leads a group of stormtroopers into a
docking bay and disintegrates the Knight mending repairs in his
starship.
And by the
time Vader and his cohorts have slipped into the quarters and
strangled a sleeping Jedi, Boba Fett, accom- panied by several
trained assassins, chases down and executes a fleeing Jedi and
his family. However, the abomination of Vader (as well as Palpatine's
sinister plan) is not complete until he destroys the remaining
Jedi Knights as they make a final stand. The battle is fearsome,
and the Jedi force manages to kill a large number of troops; but
they are vastly outnumbered, and soon, they are massacred - to
the last man - by Vader's troops.
After dismissing
Boba Fett and his troops, Darth Vader looks over the battlefield,
at the dead bodies, then takes a deep breath and says, "Kenobi,
I will deal with you myself..."
* * *
Obi-Wan
Kenobi hears Vader's words - but he is too far in space to offer
him a challenge. He accelerates his starship, thinking of his
compatriots, and hurries to the planet. However, arriving several
hours too late, Kenobi is disheartened to find the dead bodies
of his fellow Jedi Knights. He unhappily builds a funeral pyre
and burns their bodies (in a ceremony befitting a viking hero).
He then
examines the broad, huge footprints in the sand, and whispers
Darth Vader's name.
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SCENE 19
: Jhantor -- The Alderaan Embassy -- Well-guarded, the building
is deceptive in its heavy fortification. With very little military
effort, a special detachment of troops take Captain Antilles,
Lady Skywalker and party through the defenses of the Alderaan
Embassy and deliver them to a darkened conference room.
Bail Organa,
Viceroy and 1st Chairman of the Alderaan System, enters the room
and apologizes to his guests for frightening then with his personal
guard, but he confesses that his caution is not without warrant:
Jhantor was full of spies and assassins and the R2 unit (in her
embassy) could have been a clever trap. He further explains that
his colleagues had put too much trust in the stability of the
Republic, failing to realize that while the body might be sound,
the head was growing diseased and feeble, and THEY WERE ALL DEAD!
There is deep bitterness in his voice, and genuine concern for
Lady Arcadia.
Antilles
and Arcadia accept his apology and anxiously insist upon diplomatic
sanctuary. But, as news of Palpatine's takeover of the Merchanter's
Guild and the galactic shipping lanes reaches the Embassy, the
outlook is grim! Organa curses loudly, suddenly realizing that
there was nothing he could do to prevent the fall of the Republic
and guarantee their safety. Pragmatically, he prays for their
salvation by the Jedi Knights (unaware of their extinction), then
orders the immediate evacuation of the Embassy.
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SCENE 20:
Jhantor -- Palpatine's Chambers With grim anticipation, Darth
Vader, the Dark Lord of the Sith, kneels at his ruler's feet and
reports his success. Palpatine is pleased that his servant has
eliminated all but one of the Jedi Knights and smiles - with evil
delight - at Valerium and the other members of his cabinet. He
then asks the fate of Obi-Wan Kenobi. Vader is hesitant and replies
that he and Kenobi have a private matter to settle! But that answer
is not satisfactory enough.
Palpatine
pauses in his interrogation and boasts of his ambitious plans
(of galactic conquest) to Vader and the others that are assembled:
his few traitorous lieutenants have betrayed their superiors and
taken control of the Starfleet; his troops have successfully routed
marauding pirates and have begun to regulate commerce and industry
along the shipping lanes; and his political arrangements with
greedy landlords, sadistic gangsters, and power-hungry governors
have made his power absolute. He explains (that he has told them
this to illustrate) that his control is predicated on his personnel
following orders, even at the cost of their own lives!
Pausing
a second time, Palpatine dismisses Valarium, and orders him to
report to the control center. The young prince agrees and bows
slightly, a gesture Palpatine acknowledges with a perfunctory
salute. Then he spins and strides from the room, leaving the Dark
Lord looking from man to man in confused silence. As Valarium
steps into the corridor, he is grabbed and assassinated by Palpatine's
guards.
Darth Vader
then nods his understanding as the evil President reminds: "The
fate of those who fail me is DEATH!"
IMMEDIATE
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SCENE 21:
Jhantor -- Docking-bay
In the docking-bay,
the massive evacuation of the Alderaan Embassy is taking place
under tight security. The humming of elevators and the moving
of heavy equipment echo through the large chamber as the bustling
flight crews make ready their freighters and the pilots perform
final checkouts. Bail Organa, with the "help" of See Threepio,
supervises his men loading supplies and ammunition, while Artoo
Detoo aids the Lady Arcadia with her two infants. Captain Antilles
is suspiciously nowhere to be found.
Momentarily,
the defensive sensors sound alarm - but they are quickly silenced
when the unknown danger is identified as Obi-Wan Kenobi's approaching
starship. Once in the docking-bay, Kenobi emerges from the craft
and informs Bail Organa and his anxious troops that the Jedi Knights
have all been destroyed by the treachery of President Palpatine
and the hand of Darth Vader. A heart-felt murmur sweeps over the
docking-bay, like a swell in a heavy sea. The last Jedi Knight's
second piece of news is even more grim: the Starfleet, under the
command of Palpatine's forces, have formed a perimeter blockade,
and their purpose is to prevent Organa from leaving and force
him to surrender his ground troops.
Bail Organa
curses quietly to himself, recognizing the futility of further
conflict. The great leader - Viceroy and Senator of the Alderaan
system - has fought many battles: he has fought along side Kenobi
and the other Jedi Knights during the Clone Wars, and has helped
to eliminate piracy and slavery - with the crusading Lady Arcadia
- in the formation of the Merchanter's Guild. But this time, he
realizes that he is outmatched! Organa acquires a comlink from
one of his men and begins to broadcast surrender orders to his
troops.
When, suddenly,
dozens of Merchanter's Guild members, of all species and life-forms,
follow Captain Antilles into the Docking-bay and assemble around
Bail Organa. The group of freighter pilots and navigators is an
impressive one: There are representatives from Mon Calamari, Bespin,
Sullest, Correllia, Mandalore, Kessel, and Alderaan. Some are
wearing fatigues, loaded with weapons and tools, while others
are adorned in their native wear.
"Some of
them still have their ships - and the others will fly anything
we can put into the air," Antilles reports, and the morale of
Organa's men is revived again. "And if this action makes us pirates
and outlaws - in the eyes of Palpatine's new empire - then we're
with you one hundred percent!"
As the two
groups of men (and aliens) hurry off, cheering the success of
their united departure, Obi-Wan Kenobi approaches the Lady Arcadia
with his painful secret. He reluctantly admits that his pride
(in the Force) may have betrayed Anakin to Palpatine, and that
the man she once loved was now a hideous monster, more machine
than man. She is, at first, taken aback, chilled by his statement;
then, with tears in her eyes, she confesses that she, too, felt
him slipping away - many months before - and was unable to reach
him either.
Obi-Wan
Kenobi and Lady Skywalker exchange a tender embrace, and recognizing
the potential danger they they both faced, they arrange to separate
the children with the hope that they would be united one day as
brother and sister. Kenobi will take Luke to live with his brother
Owen on Tatooine, while Arcadia will arrange for Leia to live
as daughter of Senator Organa, on Alderaan. This way the children
would have a better chance of survival should one (or the other)
be discovered by Vader!
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SCENE 22:
Bridge interior -- Flagship of the Starfleet* in the Jhantor Star
System
Darth Vader
emerges from his private shuttle and strides past a handful of
troops in formation. His presence is awesome and threatening as
he approaches the starship captain. Commander Tarkin bows from
the neck down and advises his superior that they were ready to
annihilate anyone who attempts to run the blockade. Tarkin is
over confident in his appraisal of the situation, and that reflects
in his conversation with the Dark Lord.
* Special
Note: The Starfleet - at this moment in galactic history - is
composed largely of heavy cruisers, destroyers, and spacecraft
carriers, with a full complement of fighters. There are no Star
Destroyers, Death Stars, or TIE fighters because the Republic's
Starfleet was used primarily for exploration and occasional law
enforcement. However, under the ruthless command of Darth Vader,
it is a formidable opponent.
Organa and
his diplomatic party captured alive (if possible) so that they
would face the embarrassment of a public tribunal. And the Dark
Lord adds that he wants Kenobi (!), his voice conveying the image
of a dreadful fate (that would be inflicted) if his commands were
not executed.
Tarkin reluctantly
salutes and backs away from him, angered that their positions
were not reversed. He barks several commands, and his troops spring
to battle stations.
DISSOLVE
TO:
SCENES 23
TO 27: Jhantor Star System -- Various types of spacecraft against
a backdrop of stars and a brightly coloured nebulae
Alarms sound
full alert as the handful of freighters, transport ships, blockade
runners, luxury cruisers and one-man fighters approach the armada
of the Starfleet. The ships attempt - first - to cross the blockade
with the diplomatic colors and symbols of Alderaan; but, when
that fails, they energize their main deflector shields and prepare
to fight their way through. (Captain Antilles and Obi-Wan Kenobi
hold their groups up as the first wave attacks.)
Keeping
a tight formation, dozens of transport ships and luxury cruisers
move in close to the Starfleet armada - and begin blasting away,
while fifty-or-so small freighters and one-man fighters race across
their surfaces, zipping between laser bolts as they engage the
small pursuit fighters. Their plan is one of strategic genius:
by flying in close, the rebel group emascu- lates the fire-power,
which is ineffective at close-range, of the larger ships. Additionally,
the erratic and hot-dog flying of the Merchanter's Guild members
confuse and place the military pilots at a momentary disadvantage!
And that disadvantage is exploited: Antilles and Kenobi launch
the second wave of ships and wait tensely to join the conflict,
or make their escape.
However,
the heroic efforts (of the rebel flight crews) are brought to
an abrupt halt by the armada as the heavy cruisers fire broadsides
at point-blank range, disregarding their own safety. The Starfleet's
audacious and dangerous move seems to turn the tide of battle:
small one-man fighters scatter, luxury cruisers reverse their
engines, and freighters drop their additional weapons and accelerate
away. But, as the proton beams take their toll, last-ditch, suicide
runs are made by the damaged rebel craft: a cargo freighter -
loaded with weapons and cargo - heads on a collision course for
one of the Destroyers and explodes, while a transport ship - mortally
wounded in combat - limps at a heavy cruiser and detonates its
nuclear engines, destroying his opponent with him. The balance
of the small craft punch through holes and race for open space!
Captain
Antilles, piloting the saucer-shaped freighter (with Bail Organa,
Lady Arcadia, and party aboard), dives into the chaos, then steers
through the battle. Once clear, he engages his ship's hyperdrive
and soars away at light speed. Several pursuit craft follow -
but their weapons are ineffectual against his ship's deflector
shields and their ion-propelled engines are no match for his.
In another
sector of the battle, Obi-Wan Kenobi's starship swoops past an
engagement and accelerates into space, pursued by Darth Vader's
flagship. Kenobi executes a series of stunning maneuvers in an
effort to lose the Heavy Cruiser, but he quickly realizes that
it will not be easy to shake. Marshalling the Force around him,
the last Jedi prepares for a death-defying stunt. He then guides
his starship into the nebulae; and with his deflector shields
(and the Force) at full intensity, Kenobi flies through the core
of the exploding star.
Darth Vader
stands silently on the Bridge of his starship, gazing in disbelief
at the brightly-colored nebulae. He demands the scanning sensors
probe the area for any sign of the Jedi Knight - but the results
are negative! Gravely disappointed, the Dark Lord orders the Flagship
returned to the fleet and walks away, sensing that they would
meet again.
The victory
is an incomplete one for Palpatine's forces. His starfleet has
destroyed or captured nearly three dozen vehicles - but scattered
throughout the galaxy were rebelous pirates and outlaws that he
would one day have to deal with!
LAP DISSOLVE
TO:
SCENES 28
TO 30: EPILOGUE -- Jhantor -- EMPEROR Palpatine, with Darth Vader,
the Dark Lord of the Sith, at his side, smiles malevolently and
plots his next move as his assembled troops chant: "Long Live
Palpatine! Long Live the Empire!!"
Alderaan
-- Lady Arcadia Skywalker - now a common servant in the Organa
household - sings her daughter to sleep under the watchful sensors
of Artoo Detoo and See Threepio, while Bail Organa awards Captain
Antilles with a commission in his service. Tatooine -- Obi-Wan
Kenobi, the last Jedi Knight, delivers the infant boy to his brother,
Owen Lars, then disappears into the desert wasteland, awaiting
the day when Luke would claim the light sabre of his father (from
him) and become a man.
FADE OUT.
John L. Flynn
September 6, 1983
Star
Wars: The Lost Episodes